tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post1936290201971063879..comments2023-10-04T15:58:45.991-05:00Comments on Mindspeak: Flash Friday - "Rain"Carrie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-74441712049535616202009-09-17T09:06:57.037-05:002009-09-17T09:06:57.037-05:00Nice to read something different. Great use of pre...Nice to read something different. Great use of precise vocab. Welcome to #fridayflash, apologies for the late response.dan powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-46271915552612948082009-09-16T16:53:05.101-05:002009-09-16T16:53:05.101-05:00Thanks for sharing...wonderful piece. Been thinki...Thanks for sharing...wonderful piece. Been thinking about it all day.<br /><br />Cheers!Chris 'Frog Queen' Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15080568376145572154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-64486064554183738652009-09-14T10:19:51.674-05:002009-09-14T10:19:51.674-05:00This is really a beautiful piece of writing. Thank...This is really a beautiful piece of writing. Thank you so much for adding it to #fridayflash. Jen is right, this isn't a read - it's an experience. Loved it.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01117770768990691070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-90412106167034763752009-09-13T10:32:27.103-05:002009-09-13T10:32:27.103-05:00Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog r...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog recently. I appreciate it. You've got an amazing blog. I really like it.Keithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14832710800680256206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-87142340637614249132009-09-12T11:37:06.562-05:002009-09-12T11:37:06.562-05:00The response has been overwhelming. Having been &#...The response has been overwhelming. Having been 'dry' for a few weeks it seems, this encouragement is more than welcome. You guys make me feel like a star.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-46033989062164652662009-09-12T10:55:38.338-05:002009-09-12T10:55:38.338-05:00Wonderfully lyrical.
Thank you for sharing and ...Wonderfully lyrical. <br /><br />Thank you for sharing and welcome to #FridayFlash.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00655810270242939262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-29699569532667520582009-09-12T10:26:45.283-05:002009-09-12T10:26:45.283-05:00Some great bits in there. ‘I stand with my head ti...Some great bits in there. ‘I stand with my head tipped back and arms outstretched to invite the downfall. To feel the icy droplets pelt my flesh and soak my hair.’ I particularly liked. You even got me swap what I was playing on iTunes to a load of stuff by The Cult. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-74048484462119692922009-09-12T09:09:00.322-05:002009-09-12T09:09:00.322-05:00Lyrical and lovely. You offer the reader more than...Lyrical and lovely. You offer the reader more than a story -- you share an experience, and it is beautiful.<br /><br />very nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05660181882760446931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-74248561164896977992009-09-12T04:17:19.448-05:002009-09-12T04:17:19.448-05:00Incredible imagery. I could feel the pounding rain...Incredible imagery. I could feel the pounding rain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-30406849510795814692009-09-12T01:17:38.288-05:002009-09-12T01:17:38.288-05:00Excellent story. I love the your word choices in t...Excellent story. I love the your word choices in this. You really let the reader feel and experience everything with your character. Great job.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-42597886872013525832009-09-11T22:46:28.515-05:002009-09-11T22:46:28.515-05:00Fabulous imagery. Great job. I look forward to rea...Fabulous imagery. Great job. I look forward to reading more from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-68084365349921837262009-09-11T22:27:39.457-05:002009-09-11T22:27:39.457-05:00Very impressive, I could feel the rain and taste t...Very impressive, I could feel the rain and taste the dust. Thank you for posting this!CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-50214524254811541332009-09-11T17:08:08.340-05:002009-09-11T17:08:08.340-05:00Beautiful and very poignant for me, coming from a ...Beautiful and very poignant for me, coming from a drought-parched land.Lily Mulhollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804113718224654006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-27057494557538609582009-09-11T16:36:28.831-05:002009-09-11T16:36:28.831-05:00Very flowing, beautiful prose. Welcome to #friday...Very flowing, beautiful prose. Welcome to #fridayflash!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-58243995171049443802009-09-11T16:20:49.948-05:002009-09-11T16:20:49.948-05:00courageous rain..i dig that..tight write ..contain...courageous rain..i dig that..tight write ..contained and explosive all at once.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-54026127753397406292009-09-11T15:51:19.804-05:002009-09-11T15:51:19.804-05:00Wow! I really like this. Your word choice is spec...Wow! I really like this. Your word choice is spectacular, your sentences well crafted. The idea of writing to the the tune of a song is cool especially if it's The Cult. <br />Great Job!<br />~ChrisChris Chartrandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-20783363204845622552009-09-11T15:45:15.897-05:002009-09-11T15:45:15.897-05:00I could read this again and again. Except, it'...I could read this again and again. Except, it's not even a read. It's an experience. I can feel and taste it. I'm there. I recoil from the heat and seek the moisture. Thank you for adding your beautiful voice to #fridayflash!injenuityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03506168876336077017noreply@blogger.com