tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post4134465227786601516..comments2023-10-04T15:58:45.991-05:00Comments on Mindspeak: "Sin" #FridayflashCarrie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-48905694838312909662010-10-06T06:06:23.861-05:002010-10-06T06:06:23.861-05:00Loved this: icy rain penetrates her clothes and pu...Loved this: <em>icy rain penetrates her clothes and punches holes in her wings.</em><br />And the part about the bleeding neon. Such poetry in your prose.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-77292434987778797562010-10-04T17:26:31.261-05:002010-10-04T17:26:31.261-05:00Excellent piece. So beautiful in a dark enticing w...Excellent piece. So beautiful in a dark enticing way. Elegantly done. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-77752347299872201362010-10-03T14:58:48.189-05:002010-10-03T14:58:48.189-05:00I'm always impressed with your work, I read th...I'm always impressed with your work, I read this on Friday, didn't comment, and came back to read it again. I still don't know what to say, it's just beautiful. Well done.Jason Wardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13835320215697996644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-25306355328341331452010-10-03T02:43:49.273-05:002010-10-03T02:43:49.273-05:00Your writing so often transcends prose, this is so...Your writing so often transcends prose, this is somewhere between song and dream. I love it.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-63542477716420660082010-10-03T02:42:35.188-05:002010-10-03T02:42:35.188-05:00Your writing so often transcends prose, this is so...Your writing so often transcends prose, this is somewhere between song and dream. I love it.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-8431383165921980952010-10-02T21:36:49.992-05:002010-10-02T21:36:49.992-05:00Stunning and visceral as always.Stunning and visceral as always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-27614808624893907842010-10-02T09:17:14.479-05:002010-10-02T09:17:14.479-05:00Enchanting. Simply enchanting.Enchanting. Simply enchanting.Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-33100023146290715052010-10-02T01:16:45.644-05:002010-10-02T01:16:45.644-05:00Gorgeous. You do more in a smattering of paragraph...Gorgeous. You do more in a smattering of paragraphs than I could do with a legion of smoking hot angel chicks at my heels. You do indeed rock.Jason Cogginshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09509338964933754054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-65398760550834827352010-10-01T22:04:27.747-05:002010-10-01T22:04:27.747-05:00I was hooked from the first haunting image, a &quo...I was hooked from the first haunting image, a "face dappled by silver rain." You created a very moving piece in so few words.Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-5859467113696432392010-09-30T23:38:48.560-05:002010-09-30T23:38:48.560-05:00This was so gorgeous to read... wow.This was so gorgeous to read... wow.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-23977740950635574452010-09-30T23:07:10.069-05:002010-09-30T23:07:10.069-05:00You make sin sound heavenly.You make sin sound heavenly.~Timhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06774944172261988587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-53425860036499833312010-09-30T20:39:57.572-05:002010-09-30T20:39:57.572-05:00Such a beautiful balance of light and dark; so poe...Such a beautiful balance of light and dark; so poetic and lyrical. <br />Adam B @revhappinessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-70169818575866879292010-09-30T20:34:11.757-05:002010-09-30T20:34:11.757-05:00I think I like "ethereal" to describe th...I think I like "ethereal" to describe this peace. The writing is lyrical but the words are sinister. You just know he doesn't want what's best for her. Excellent.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-3472836318823954052010-09-30T19:58:20.125-05:002010-09-30T19:58:20.125-05:00I had to read this three times - it's that goo...I had to read this three times - it's that good. LOVE this description especially: "an absence of nothingness, less than not, as if light had never been."<br />Stunning.Deannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02612458168941437163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-59392377302271301582010-09-30T19:27:38.682-05:002010-09-30T19:27:38.682-05:00Beautiful, sensual, sinful. Gorgeous writing, Carr...Beautiful, sensual, sinful. Gorgeous writing, Carrie.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-18181463166241645372010-09-30T19:24:41.519-05:002010-09-30T19:24:41.519-05:00A fallen angel indeed. Gorgeous, sensual prose. Lo...A fallen angel indeed. Gorgeous, sensual prose. Loved it. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-9859650757596733152010-09-30T17:30:58.849-05:002010-09-30T17:30:58.849-05:00loved the image of the red neon dappling through t...loved the image of the red neon dappling through the holed wings, such a sumptuously rich image. This is achingly beautiful writing. The best of painting & literature brought together<br /><br />Marc NashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-68965825917231073932010-09-30T17:27:45.562-05:002010-09-30T17:27:45.562-05:00Sin indeed, but what an intoxicating and beautiful...Sin indeed, but what an intoxicating and beautifully crafted story.Rachel Blackbirdsonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02246966713076881105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-76380832940022746452010-09-30T16:53:21.090-05:002010-09-30T16:53:21.090-05:00Incredible description, as always. I'd say &qu...Incredible description, as always. I'd say "it's as if we're there watching" but that's a bit voyeuristic.<br /><br />Excellent stuff.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-8524298662899180812010-09-30T15:30:49.727-05:002010-09-30T15:30:49.727-05:00I had to read it twice to revel in the sensuality ...I had to read it twice to revel in the sensuality of it.<br /><br />Great work.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-19888994896203254132010-09-30T15:20:20.600-05:002010-09-30T15:20:20.600-05:00That's men for you. All hands, no interest in ...That's men for you. All hands, no interest in wings.<br /><br />Wait, I am a man.<br /><br />This is a conundrum.<br /><br />Glad the holes the rain punched didn't cripple her wings. Sin's fun for a minute, but it's much better to fly.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-79279874537326648612010-09-30T15:17:20.611-05:002010-09-30T15:17:20.611-05:00"an absence of nothingness, less than not&quo..."an absence of nothingness, less than not"<br /><br />Poetic prose. A lovely ethereal piece. Beautiful!Jaxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194706618184875916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-29083291356890415152010-09-30T14:30:34.043-05:002010-09-30T14:30:34.043-05:00The imagery hits home the sense of a fall from gra...The imagery hits home the sense of a fall from grace. Well done.Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08377570668333453073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-65896638248304559172010-09-30T14:26:53.223-05:002010-09-30T14:26:53.223-05:00What a beautifully written piece. I had to read it...What a beautifully written piece. I had to read it slow to catch the full impact of each word. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-38826124212875536392010-09-30T14:15:35.974-05:002010-09-30T14:15:35.974-05:00There is great elegance in your writing as well as...There is great elegance in your writing as well as menace. I salute your bows.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com