tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post9147407716646195931..comments2023-10-04T15:58:45.991-05:00Comments on Mindspeak: "The Man in the Elevator" #FridayflashCarrie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-43360508564597689412012-07-25T23:53:08.151-05:002012-07-25T23:53:08.151-05:00I like Ren too, this is intriguing. Good stuff Car...I like Ren too, this is intriguing. Good stuff Carrie!Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-28379185875829722222012-07-21T01:24:37.280-05:002012-07-21T01:24:37.280-05:00Cool stuff Carrie. I'll have to drop in and re...Cool stuff Carrie. I'll have to drop in and read the previous installments. <br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-28019093377385587942012-07-20T22:28:03.459-05:002012-07-20T22:28:03.459-05:00As good as the other excerpts were, this is outsta...As good as the other excerpts were, this is outstanding.Sonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351929216915547602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-37694442441912261362012-07-20T05:14:06.255-05:002012-07-20T05:14:06.255-05:00Love the tension in this scene so much.Love the tension in this scene so much.nerinedormanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12885964421325041778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-75467992654957652682012-07-20T01:54:50.144-05:002012-07-20T01:54:50.144-05:00it's been great up to now so good luck with th...it's been great up to now so good luck with the rest of it. I love the image of a rising elevator being like drawing water from a well - you slay me with your images Carrie :-)<br /><br />marcSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-65480413580517338982012-07-20T01:42:00.687-05:002012-07-20T01:42:00.687-05:00Ooh intriguing! I like this Ren, and I'm excit...Ooh intriguing! I like this Ren, and I'm excited to see what he does next. You've definitely got a great premise on your hands.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-53522271783739668062012-07-19T22:53:43.409-05:002012-07-19T22:53:43.409-05:00Yeah, you can definitely see the setup is closing ...Yeah, you can definitely see the setup is closing and to share further would enter serious spoiler territory. But it's been fun to get glimpses, Carrie, and I wish you the best as you take it back behind the veil. The dialogue in this one seems the sharpest, almost ping-ponging at points, in a pleasant manner (for me, not them).John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com